#1
Encore of the Great Theatre called Earth,
the world is a stage,
and we all play a part.
unfolding like the drama,
here the deception starts.
you play your part well,
like your under some spell.
well wake up and break free
smell the blood you have spilt,
you call this victory?
this is just a play,
and this just your part,
for us here today this is just the start.

well this is an encore,
we all have been here before.
all these lessons of the past,
that we choose to ignore.
what happens next, is no big mystery.
we will be finished, take it from history.

replay replay,
in the cosmic scene how short is our day?
Not enough to make a difference but don't waste it away,
from the higher realms they must enjoy,
the excitement we offer them endlessly,
fighting and warring, selfishness key,
the dramas played out over and over,
the conflict is simple we cant work together,
divided we fall constantly into the past,
which means a real future can never last.


just wrote this i appreciate any and all responses
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Last edited by man_on_the_moon at Apr 12, 2011,
#2
I like them but u need to change up the "loftily..." part in the second verse maybe something like
"Not enough to make a difference but don't waste it away"
#3
thanks so much for your input I made some changes and actually adde what you wrote cuz I think it works perfectly i hope you dont mind thanks so much
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