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Hey all, just wrote this earlier today. Because of the length of the piece, I've decided to cut in half. However, if you want, I will edit in the other half. I will crit for a crit, so leave a link and whatnot.

(The Narcissist)

the end of time
a narcissist's dream
I have an eternity
to redefine life
I must forget everything I knew
to recreate life
I must forget everything I knew
to rename life
DESTROY THE PAST NOTION
DESTROY THE PAST LIFE
I am in control
DESTROY THE PAST LIFE

(The Complex)

the shards of my imagination
are cradled in my hands
a white backdrop: for the pastel of my creativity
a chance to rebuild
rebuild life
a beauty that only I can create
recreate this face
characteristics that only I can name
rename this life
A VISION
to achieve perfection
a set of rules established
to achieve peace
[RECREATE PEACE]
a set of laws defined
to achieve peace
[RENAME PEACE]
morality established by the immoral
piety established by the unfaithful
religion established by the god-complex
fairness established by the corrupted
government established by the power hungry
a world created by a god-complex
THIS WORLD... is yours to take
as long as you follow these rules
set to f*ck the common man
EMASCULATE
no longer the god of your creation
SEPARATE US