#1
Hey everyone, I wrote the lyrics to this song a few months ago, but I recently got around to writing guitar for it, it's very happy, and I can't think of any influences I got from writing this.

C4C

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/MattAnderson111/music/all/play981913

Lyrics:

The radio waves break the silence
Sparkling motions of light dance around
Bright eyes and curious smiles
Make it hard to let out a sound

The wind blew through your hair
and as I swept it out of your face
The look you gave me, I could tell
was met with everlasting grace

The thoughts I get from being here
A sound, A twist, setting near
Though the cold seeps into my bones
the warmth I get from you shows

Oh, the sights and the sounds
release endorphins through me
But the sky, and the ground
hold a world to be seen

Sitting along the riverbanks
Grasped oh, so tight
The tree frogs and fireflys
Add a soundtrack to the night

Truth be told I haven't the worst to say
The stars take my worries and throw them away

Oh, the sights and the sounds
release endorphins through me
But the sky, and the ground
hold a world to be seen

The sights and the sounds
make a rift within me
The sky and the ground
Shows what could never be

Oh, the sights and the sounds
release endorphins through me
But the sky, and the ground
hold a world to be seen
Poop.


Yes, poop.
#2
I like it, a lot. The lyrics are really interesting and innovative.

Vocals, are pretty good, i like it.

Guitar, real simple but simple is good with most acoustic songs, relaxing and upbeat. The only thing i could picture being added is possible another lead guitarist playing under your track, or a soft, soft drum beat with snare and cymbals, maybe a little kick drum. But the musicality is great.

Recording quality, not perfect... behind the vocals you can hear a small echo like you were recording in a big room, but it still sounds great.

Overall, i like it, its a great song. You have a lot of potential.

Let me know what you think of my music.