#1
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/NOTAFOX/music/all/play983507

added a few things, like backing vocals for the chorus and extended the first chorus alittle. let me know what you guys think
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#2
I like the tones but the beginning of the track is to repetetive. It gets a little annoying after a while. I dont know why, but I couldnt hear the vocals through out the track. It does have some interesting riffs and tones though. With the right vocals and a killer lead, it would sound awesome.

I didnt like the drums too much though. The drum kit sounded fine, but the beat wasnt up to scratch.

A solid track though. Its a good foundation for what ever you want to put up on it. Nice work man.

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https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1431410
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#3
thaks man. i dont have any real vocals on the track, and the backing vocals i talk about are just like a synth or something and there kinda quiet. im not to good at making lead guitar stuff up so il just let a real guitarist worry about that when i find one lol, and the drums the same thing lol. but thank you.

and i commented on your song
There is a saying in poetry, "show me, don't tell me." here you are announcing everything, like an announcer to a sporting event. "Dave has the ball. Dave passes the ball. Dave picks his ass."

~Zanascross

XD epic win
#5
i listend to untitled 2. i hope thats the right song. no vocals though? cetchy. but it needs a change. its just that driving non stop sound. by 130 im almost wanting to turn it off. mix it up a little. this reminds me of video game music. you can do better man. just being honest.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=26961836#post26961836
#6
ya, im using guitar pro 6 and im still thinking of lyrics so no vox. and now that i got the basics of it down i will start mixing things up with it soon, or if i can get into a band soon let each instrument think of there own little things to add. and the tone sounds how it does cuz im horrible at making good tones <_> so thats why it sounds like video game music lol. but thanks for being honest with it =D ill crit yours, and fedner ill get to yours now, i was busy yesterday lol
There is a saying in poetry, "show me, don't tell me." here you are announcing everything, like an announcer to a sporting event. "Dave has the ball. Dave passes the ball. Dave picks his ass."

~Zanascross

XD epic win