#2
You're right. It is a bit of a joke. Catchy, but not much else. Good job though. Keep it up. Thanks for the crit.
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#3
i liked it, its was kinda funny and catchy. the beginning sounded like another song to me, but i cant remember what, but otherwise it was good. making little joke songs is fun and can be good once in awhile, and this song was
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#4
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i liked it, its was kinda funny and catchy. the beginning sounded like another song to me, but i cant remember what, but otherwise it was good. making little joke songs is fun and can be good once in awhile, and this song was


Lol thanks man
#5
Its a funny concept, good gag. I also listened to I bid you adieu, It was good I liked it especially that harmonica solo.
#6
Quote by Osiris77
Its a funny concept, good gag. I also listened to I bid you adieu, It was good I liked it especially that harmonica solo.

Hahah thanks dude. Yeah I was hoping some people would check out some others. I don't know why I chose this song I guess just cause its funny.