#3
Hey,

that was realy not a bad try ... the guitars sound a little fizzy to me ... maybe a little more of somethin around 100 hz, less 2 kHz, less 4 kHz and a highcut around 7 kHz ?? would hold the together and gives the overheads some more space ...

the drums sounds natural ... soundwise ... if they are programmed you should look for the hihats, cymbals etc. emphasize them a little more randomly and stress the countin ONE-two-THREE-four ... if you know what i mean (and if i explained it right languagewise haha) ...

you should maybe record a bass to it so the guitars glue more to the bass drum ...

and what did you do around 21 seconds ?? ...

anyway songwriting is good ... keep your ideas going you are realy on the right track


as far as c4c goes here is mine https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1433421

Greatz M