#1
So, as I love to make an introduction before I proceed to the song, here's how I made it.

My "girl bad streak" is continuing, since I've hooked up with a girl I like for about month-or-two, and we were together for 2 days, but then we had to brake up because she has too much things to do about college, that she doesn't have time for a serious relationship. She said that we'll need to wait for a month or two, and we'll see how things go there.

I know the name of the song is not really original, that's why I'm looking for a new one.

The song's not so good if you don't sing it, but, mweh, hopefully it will be good enough like this.

Enjoy.

- Waiting -

-Verse 1-
The further you are, the more it hurts...
The colder your heart, the more I bleed...
The less you give, the more I want...
And I need you more, every passing day, oooh..!

-Verse 2-
The later it is, the more I miss you...
The pain in the heart, with you on my mind...
Sweet numbness of love, hurts even more...
Because I know, you will be gone soon, oooh..!

-Chorus-
And I will wait..!
Oh, I will wait for this life to end,
I won't pretend, I'm only a friend,
I will wait, for your sweet lips...

And I will stand..!
Oh, I shall stand in the tunnels of time,
I will stand, and that is no lie,
I will listen, to your songs and my heart, oooh...

-Verse 3-
[still working on it]

-Chorus 2-
And I will wait..!
Oh, I will wait for this life to end,
I won't pretend, I'm only a friend,
I will wait, for your sweet lips...

And I will stand..!
Oh, I shall stand in the tunnels of time,
I will stand, and that is no lie,
I will listen, to your songs and my heart, oooh...

-Bridge-
And I know, no matter what I do,
That feeling, will not get through,
And still, I will be waiting for you,
Ooh, whoah, ooooh

-Chorus [outro]-
And I will wait..!
Oh, I will wait for this life to end,
I won't pretend, I'm only a friend,
I will wait...
Yes, I will wait...
For you to come back...
#3
i like it tbh i can hear it in a kinda dream theater ballad style super work

should be called tunnels of time