#2
Wow, I really really enjoyed that whole intro section, very nice! I suggest you stray away from that section a little earlier though. A nice song structure would be: that sweetass intro you have -> a very short clean transition or something -> some djenty heavy riffs -> a clean break -> a reprise of that intro, as an epic outro
#3
to be honest, i cant find a single thing that i don't like. everything flows well into each other.
good job.
#4
Quote by GuitarFreak1387
to be honest, i cant find a single thing that i don't like. everything flows well into each other.
good job.


Thanks a lot mate!
#5
I agree the intro could be recycled to make an awesome ending. Other than that it was fantastic. It flows and grooves really well without getting boring or repetitive.
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#6
hm.. maybe you could try to apply the "movement" in your rhythm also to your melodies?
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