Poll: Is this worth working on?
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View poll results: Is this worth working on?
Yes
4 80%
No
1 20%
Voters: 5.
bmathew
Registered User
Join date: Jan 2011
164 IQ
#1
Hi everyone, its been a while since I posted. I've definitly sat down and reworked my structure and need your help. I started this song today and I need critiques to send me in the right direction and if anyone is willing to add a drum section to this please do see as I will appreciate it alot. I am not very skilled with using the drums as I have only used them few times. Thanks again
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RECENT WORK.gp5
RECENT WORK 2.0.gp5
Last edited by bmathew at Apr 20, 2011,
Wquennasar
Melancholic
Join date: May 2010
423 IQ
#2
I actually quite liked this. Get rid of that god-awful breakdown (48-57) and it's really pleasant.
All is ghost in memory and poison in the sun
bmathew
Registered User
Join date: Jan 2011
164 IQ
#3
Lmfao thanks brotha and yeah I was kinda drunk when I got around to the breakdown so no worries, that will be taken care of, glad to know I'm getting somewhere.
bmathew
Registered User
Join date: Jan 2011
164 IQ
#5
Oh my god that is awesome, could you add anything on the updated one? If you could write a simple loop for the solo and then something for the breakdown that would be much appreciated