#1
A short song I wrote based off of the 28 days later series.

Their flesh slowly rots
like a dying twin
They are feeding
on the future
of the world
In the wake of an apocalypse
in the dark cemetery
you run, but cannot escape
from the fear
of the living dead

their bodies and faces are decrepit
skin sagging from their bones
wearily dragging themselves
towards your home
your planks will not last
they are here to set you free
if you choose to go with them
you will see your family

They seek their prey
on the edge of London
Citizens running
Trying to survive
But the walking dead
just eat them alive

their bodies and faces are decrepit
skin sagging from their bones
wearily dragging themselves
towards your home
your planks will not last
they are here to set you free
if you choose to go with them
you will see your family
#3
is there like a rhythm or just constant run on no offense I like the lyrics but is seems like your describing them not singing about zombies in general
Welcome the reaper for I am the one they call XDeAtHX
#4
It's more of a broken rhythm. There isn't a rhythm that I can just write out.. It's just a feel when I play it.

@zirkonflex, I had that feel too. I was listening to JFAC when I wrote it, so I was definitely under their influence.. Is it too similar? Should I change the intro?
#5
Ok well if you ever need help with rhythm let me know
Welcome the reaper for I am the one they call XDeAtHX
#9
Yeah, it has pretty sick music backing it.
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