First off, that is one plaid shirt. On the relevant side of things, I liked the piece that started at 1:45, to the end. Sounded like it would make a good intro. When you started picking (Right after the chords at the beginning) it was a little messy, and not very musical to my ears with a bit of work it could sound good though.
A lot of it was the quality of what I'm recording into. All I have is a crappy webcam, so it doesn't really do it any justice. Thanks for the info though.