#2
I really liked the dual vocals, just wish they were sung louder and with more feeling.
Good song, but nothing really stands out too much. Could have made it a bit more 'hooky', but that's just me.
Not much to critique about. I'd really like to hear a recorded version.

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https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=27010382