#2
Listened to your song dude. I think it shows that you are on your way to become a good shredder one day. However, it was mostly improv. I would have liked to hear somthing more structured. Nonetheless, keep up the good work. I gave you a thumbs up on youtube.

Comment, rate mine? I'ts a shred guitar song, a la marty friedman and joe satriani.

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#3
Ty for your critics But this songs lacks melody or what? I would appreciate ,if you could comment more about it