Mostly not my preferred listening style, but I can dig some of it.

But as they say, someone somewhere will like it. Watch the entire country of Denmark demand a CD, threaten with death pirates and copiers and make you the richest man in the world.
The intro may be too dissonant, and the chugging is a bit... Generic. The brass section was great, and the rest of the instruments work well with it, although it starts too abruptly. 48-55 was pretty good, although it stops all of a sudden, and the song ends...

I would suggest rethinking the song.