Questions, comments, trolls... all are welcome. It would be much appreciated if you could crit this. Everything in the first two minutes was planned out, but the rest was total improv.

*EDIT* You may want to turn down your speakers for this one, the audio quality is quite crappy.
Last edited by I Have no Soul at Apr 25, 2011,
The audio clips really bad so its hard to listen to, but if you take a few of those riffs and build a nice foundation you can write a good song with them
You've got some cool riff ideas there. It is pretty hard to hear with all the distorted audio, but the intro riff caught my attention well and made me want to keep on listening. Could create a nice song off of that. Should create 2 guitar layering if you record a solid version. It'd sound awesome in the end.

Crit for crit when you have the time: