#1
Another demo from my band Galadh - "Nothing"

http://www.myspace.com/galadhband

This one has a lot of time changes, and a little bit of jazz in there.

Would appreciate serious critique from other musos,

Enjoy.
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#2
I thought it was really groovy, until it got to the breakdown, and then it got groovy again.

IMO, scrap the generic-core breakdown and you'll have a solid real metal track

One other thing, chuck a compressor on the cymbals and it'll make it all sound better :P

Overall it's a great tune
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