Once again the intro riff is pretty decent but gets stale. Verse riff is good, much better. I love the chord section as well, very Meshuggah/ TesseracT-esque.
Over all, it's a good start, I like to see how it develops. Once again, MORE ATMOSPHERE PLEASE! :P
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