joeryer
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Join date: Aug 2008
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#1
One of my old forgotten ideas which i very recently dug up.
What do you guys think?
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Idea.gp5
doive
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#2
Cool riff

Personally i'd put some rhythm other than straight semis in the G3 part - but that may just be because tux guitar is making it sound a little bit like a duck...
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joeryer
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Join date: Aug 2008
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#3
Quote by doive
Cool riff

Personally i'd put some rhythm other than straight semis in the G3 part - but that may just be because tux guitar is making it sound a little bit like a duck...


Thanks for the advice, It may be better to go with a more clean guitar, playing similar notes, maybe octaves. It would sit better in the mix, and the straight rhythm does get fairly boring after a while!
frankibo
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#4
Love the riff, the lack of progression is a bit boring though. I definitely think you should experiment with atmosphere more.
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