joeryer
Registered User
Join date: Aug 2008
298 IQ
#1
This is a more recent song of mine, a full song in a djenty, proggish style.
Hope you enjoy, and i would love to hear your opinions as this is one of my more serious attempts!
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1 Aboombooombam.zip
Led Hed Lefty
Registered User
Join date: Jan 2008
97 IQ
#2
****en awesome
This is a G chord....i used to be in a cranberries tribute band.
joeryer
Registered User
Join date: Aug 2008
298 IQ
#3
Quote by Led Hed Lefty
****en awesome


Thanks a lot mate
hugh20
The Heavenly Child
Join date: Oct 2007
2,858 IQ
#4
Bars 81-104 are fantastic. The intro gets a bit repetitive though. I would love to hear this recorded.


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joeryer
Registered User
Join date: Aug 2008
298 IQ
#5
Quote by hugh20
Bars 81-104 are fantastic. The intro gets a bit repetitive though. I would love to hear this recorded.


I Am known for my long intros, I never found a way to cut that intro down.. so i kept it :P
I like it when the crash cymbal changes to the china, even though having that taken out would have shortened it a bit!

Thank you, I do want to find a band and record all of my stuff one day!
JunKDepot
Registered User
Join date: Nov 2009
646 IQ
#6
so, ya like Djent do ya .... gonna listen and then Critique
frankibo
UG Board King
Join date: May 2007
3,093 IQ
#7
More interesting leads would have helped a lot. A more interesting rhythm would have been a start as well, more off kilter with more notes than just two. The more chordy section was nice. Could have done with a bit more atmosphere, synths, cleans etc.
Clean section now, sounds nice. Very metalcore section, it sounds pretty cool though, so I'll let the generic-ness slide. Rhythm could have done with some progression.
Over all, not bad, bit bland though.
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