#1
****.

life's ****ing peachy
don't worry about me, i've been through worse, i say
you don't need to know the way everything builds itself up
watches me as i swell with delight, glad it's coming together at last


then when it looks like it can't get any better
it

clmeurslemcbrus
rub mcl ues cmrlbel
crm luesb ll ues b lrr crbu mle ls s


just like each and every other aspect of my being.
the only people for me are the mad ones, the ones who are mad to live, mad to talk, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at the same time, the ones that never yawn or say a commonplace thing, but burn, burn, burn


#2
I don't think the swearing is necessary. Nobody actually says "peachy" and means it, anyway. The last line of the first stanza could be split into two. Besides that, I really enjoyed this. I like what you did with "crumbles".

Also, you should probably throw the chairs next time. You probably won't do as much damage.