#1
Now i don't want to hear about the swearing it's just part of how i write my lyrics soo here it is

The Fear Of Death

Been a slave
off the payroll
blackmailed
angry and desolate

Can't remember the last time
When I was free...
Joined this corporation for a better life
and i got this...

Tattered clothing and callused feet
Bare but not broken...
These scars tell a tale of madness
And intellectual torture...

Whispered - (YOU ARE NOTHING!
YOU ARE INADEQUATE
YOU MAKE ME SICK
NOBODY CARES ABOUT YOU!)

Reduced to an instinctual being
cowering in a corner...
I only come out to feed on scraps
Reduced to A NOTHING!!!

Now it's time...
now it's time...
now it's time...
FOR...A... REVOLT!!!

Spoken - ALRIGHT MEAT!!! IT'S TIME TO STAND UP TO THIS ASSHOLE! WE WILL BRING HIM THE PAIN THAT HE HAS GIVEN US FOR ALL THESE YEARS! BUT WE HAVE VENGEANCE ON OUR SIDES! MAY SHE SHOW HIM THE MERCY WE CAN AND WIll NOT!!! WE WILL TEAR ASUNDER HIS WORLD AND BRING DEATH TO ALL HE "LOVES" AND "HOLDS DEAR!"
****... HIM!!!! UP!!!

NOW IT'S TIME
FOR YOU TO ENTER THIS WORLD
AS WE SEE IT
CRUEL AND UNUSUAL
YOU WILL FACE DEATH
IN THE PIT YOU BUILT FOR US
SURVIVAL THE GAME
NOW ASK YOURSELF...
DO YOU HAVE IT IN YOU!!!

SUFFER!!
SUFFER!!
LIKE US!!

The panic is in
fear in the eyes
inside the iris
their is a momentus feeling

"What is it?" you ask
You will find out
in that split second
Before you heart stops beating

IT'S THE FEAR OF DYING
BUT I HAVE SPOKEN TOO MUCH
LET THE GAMES BEGIN
FOR THIS



GREEDY......MOTHER....****ER!!!!



(Instrumental "OUTRO")
#2
This piece definitely emits a seething loathing of ... the man? Or death himself? Kind of an industrial piece--the word painting works very well in many places and the dynamics of the capitalization (albiet a little distracting) accurately represent the emotion conveyed. Good job.
#3
Quote by datgnat
This piece definitely emits a seething loathing of ... the man? Or death himself? Kind of an industrial piece--the word painting works very well in many places and the dynamics of the capitalization (albiet a little distracting) accurately represent the emotion conveyed. Good job.


Couldnt have summed it up better myself.

Seems like a set of really good lyrics man, i can really feel the emotion rushing off it.

Awesome job man