It was technically brilliant. But IMO you lose some of the raw emotion of that song when you start throwing those little runs in there. It's not needed in this song. This song is it's strongest when it's at it's simplest. That is where the emotion in it comes from.

Very good playing though, and I did like your interpretation.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1436472