This is the first time I've ever tried to write some lyrics. I want honest feedback nonetheless. I'm not expecting much positive.

Lyrics are inspired by scenes from The Pacific (and maaaybeeee a little Call Of Duty, lol). I'm trying to write lyrics for a "thrashy" metal track I've written. This is not supposed to be sung, but growled, and it's supposed to be short!

They Came Out Of Nowhere

Heart pumping
sweat pouring
adrenaline tearing my mind

My one true instinct wide awake
fear of death
the one true fact of life

there is no second chance
only a final round

Tightened grip
shaky hands
this is my last stand

Honest opinions about this? ^^
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(or in my profile!)

Last edited by BlisteringDDj at Apr 28, 2011,