Madzää
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Join date: Apr 2008
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#1
Since solo acoustic arrangements are getting popular again on this forum, I might as well post one of mine. This was originally a study on chromaticism for my local choir, which I ended up transforming into an actual piece. I chose a smaller SAB group, partly because the tenor is simply not needed here, although some of the notes are rather low for the alto voice, and some splits of this exact voice are needed. After performing it a few times, I´ve had the idea of arranging this for solo guitar. This is a simple cleanup of the version I got while importing this from Sibelius.

I´ve cleaned up the tab into the positions I like to play, but because of individual preference, I´ve set it up to show the notes only. Feel free to set it to tab display, though, if you want my recommendations. Also, please be aware that this piece is only 17 bars long, because I did only import the main theme and not the minor modifications because of the lyrics in the further repeats of the choir. I´m thinking of using this little piece as the interlude between some verses, to get a little variation.

I will C4C, the more you write, the more I write back. As usually, this piece is not intended for RSE, so please listen to it in midi.

Edit: On a second thought, this is actually a little bit short to crit, so I guess it´s probably just an interresting listen.
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dei plena sunt omnia.gp4
dei plena sunt omnia.gp5
dei plena sunt omnia.mid
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Last edited by Madzää at Apr 29, 2011,
frankibo
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Join date: May 2007
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#2
I like it, but I don't really know what else to say, I have no idea how to crit a piece like this. It was enjoyable and the chromaticism added a certain level of intrigue which I liked. Obviously I don't want C4C, just letting you know I enjoyed it.
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Colossus
Life Is Brutal
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Join date: Jun 2008
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#3
The first two bars remind me of another classical piece that I can't name.

Bars 3-8 have an interesting theme, and I liked the main theme from 9 onwards. Not too much more to say on a piece made of only 17 bars. I could go way deep into it and dissect your counter points and resolves, but if its not broken, don't fix it.

Good piece, and I could see this as a choir arrangement.

Mine is also a piece that focuses on classical chromaticism.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1435617
Last edited by Life Is Brutal at Apr 28, 2011,
amonamarthmetal
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Join date: Aug 2008
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#4
is it me or does it have a jewish sound to it? if that makes sense. i liked it though, make it longer.
Geldin
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Join date: Sep 2008
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#5
I like it. While it's really short, it has a real identity to it. It reminds me a great deal of Klezmer music, which is essentially a meeting point between old-fashioned Jewish-Eastern European folk music and modern contemporary music. The chromatics give it a very distinct feel that isn't quite exotic, but isn't quite normal, safe western music.

Like Life said, I guess I could go more in depth with it, but I honestly don't think anything needs changing. This is an interesting, slightly quirky piece, and it delivers an interesting identity in the space of 17 bars while so many modern songs fail to find identity in a 3 minute time frame.

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1435490