#1
this is a song me and my friend wrote one saturday a couple of months ago after our band lost it's drummer which led to us breaking up. thought i might post it here just to see what you all think of it (so we can see whether it's worth using in a future project). C4C btw
Attachments:
the start of a revolution.gp5
Ben

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Blackstar ht-408 cab
Landola V72 Acoustic
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#2
I really like 70-93 and 106-112, they stood out in a good way, the rest was all right, but not too special. That doesn't have to be a bad thing though, but you could definitely improve them
#3
thanks, i was gonna tweak the intro a bit, have more of a lead presence in there somewhere rather than just the chords and some of the drums are gonna get a bit of tweaking in places so keep an eye out for a revised version
Ben

GEAR:
Squier Vintage Modified Telecaster Deluxe
Squier Vintage Modified Jaguar
Blackstar ht-5 head
Blackstar ht-408 cab
Landola V72 Acoustic
Seymour Duncan Woody SC

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#4
Overall, it was pretty good. I have to say though it seems as though all the tracks are a little uptight at times up until you reach the breakdown. Not necessarily a bad thing in some cases but in this track I think some drum fills/shaking up the drums every couple repetitions and/or a couple lead parts added in behind the chords could help out a ton. The tremolo picked lead behind the rhythm in the breakdown section was very nice and added a nice depth to that section.

Thanks again for the feedback on my track bro, look forward to hearing an updated version of this one and some new stuff.
#5
thanks man, just working on it now so i should have something up in the next couple of hours or so
Ben

GEAR:
Squier Vintage Modified Telecaster Deluxe
Squier Vintage Modified Jaguar
Blackstar ht-5 head
Blackstar ht-408 cab
Landola V72 Acoustic
Seymour Duncan Woody SC

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#6
here it is guys for your entertainment (hopefully for the right reasons), tell me what you think
Attachments:
the start of a revolution revised version.gp5
Ben

GEAR:
Squier Vintage Modified Telecaster Deluxe
Squier Vintage Modified Jaguar
Blackstar ht-5 head
Blackstar ht-408 cab
Landola V72 Acoustic
Seymour Duncan Woody SC

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