#1
alright so tried making a song with a bit more of a ska feel than I would normally do, and played every instrument in the recording.

The Song's on my profile and I was thinking of putting it on an acoustic demo that some people were gonna review for me, so wanted to see what you guys thought of it
profile= http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/VforFailure/

if you want a crit just leave the link here
#2
There's plenty of good ideas there, and great singing too. But the rhythm is all over the place for most of the song unfortunately. The best thing you can do is record the rhythm guitar to a click track (once you find your tempo) and build the song around that. At the moment it's like everything is speeding up and slowing down to match another instrument, but they never find cohesion. Rhythm aside, I can hear a pretty good song there!

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1435719