#1
North Carolina weather early afternoon
Parked by the side of the road, leaving soon
Sick of the rain and cold up north
Traveled down south for moderate temperature
Felt the sun and warmth shine within me

The storm is coming
Two indiviudals approach me, drugged out as the eye can see
Getting high on meth, looking for their next fix
Staring down at me

I fear for the worst but it was to late
The dirty face of the indivdual
Long thin individual with crooked teeth
Dirty face and full of scabs
Eyes menacing, larger then life
Blood shot indeed

I need to go and avoid them
They went up to me and asked about some money
Very demanding anger poured out of their tongues
They neeeded meth to stay sane

I have no recollection what they wanted
But i ran into woods away from their mischeif

Once i bought one of them burger king
I appear to be in my childhood home
there was a group of people high on meth in the upstairs
i was trapped in the downstairs
and had no way out of this situation
Because i gave them a reason to follow me in

I sat down there for days and perished


*Woke up from this strange dream i had!*
#2
strange dream indeed. poems got some flaws but it works. dig
I want Super Saiyan abilities
#3
Quote by jod23
North Carolina weather early afternoon
Parked by the side of the road, leaving soon
Sick of the rain and cold up north
Traveled down south for moderate temperature
Felt the sun and warmth shine within me


The storm is coming
Two indiviudals approach me, drugged out as the eye can see
Getting high on meth, looking for their next fix
Staring down at me


The first part was good until the moderate temperature line. That line seems to have to many syllables and drags it down.

Second part here has some cool thoughts.

Overall, wierd as dream. Were you high when you went to bed ha!

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1437191
#4
nah i wasnt high but drank a few beers before i went to bed. i had a long stressful week at work and have been getting crazy dreams recently. This dream i had to write it down an share it on here. i wrote this morning when i woke up in one setting. it was pretty damn weird haha