#1
Lyrics for a thrashy/death style of metal. Let me know what you think and I'll gladly check your stuff out! Cheers!

Verse 1
Misplaced my trust
In your state of mind
Only blood will purify
I demand your life
Satisfy the debt
Manifest
by foolish greed

Verse 2
Stay out of my life
I won’t play the games
The more pushed the worse your fall
Witness my anger
A blazing fire
To scorch the
bones of deceit

Chorus
Disgrace, Disdain
Thoughts consume the mind
Dreaded, this life of Heresy
I’ll end the plague
Wipe clean the slate
This World shall quake
From the Blaze

Verse 3
Smashed underfoot
The smoke from your ash
Like bluster You once emit
I stand on your grave
But none shall known
For not a trace
of your past
remains

C4C Yo's
#2
OH lifeless I dream of such horrors, wherein lies DESTRUCTION!

OT though, It seems quite typical to the genre and it's not bad I guess but I can't say I was very impressed either
Last edited by Gibanez at Apr 29, 2011,
#3
Your face lies still
I can't see your face
and it's freezing
My father told me that.
#4
Ok. Not sure if thats mockery or what Ha! If it is thats fine. I get thats its a tad dramatic. Strangely enough I do like the line. Thanks?

edit to Gibanez: Fair enough. I'm newer to writing and still trying to get my sea legs. I have never been overly poetic, especially when dealing with aggression. Thanks for the input!
Last edited by merriman44 at Apr 29, 2011,
#5
Quote by merriman44
Ok. Not sure if thats mockery or what Ha! If it is thats fine. I get thats its a tad dramatic. Strangely enough I do like the line. Thanks?


I thought you might like it wrote it just for you young lyricist..
#7
You are aware of the fact that I just wrote something completely random right?

I would suggest that you have a look at other lyrics and just write, but try to give it much thought and give it some time