Hey everyone!

I have a couple of songs that I recorded here, would love to hear your opinions of them...

They are both just ideas, but here goes anyway....

First one has vocals....


Second one is a "Hendrix-esque" groovy instrumental jam....


They're not great or anything, but would still love to hear what you think!

Thanks very much!
Last edited by DanielShaw123 at Apr 30, 2011,
I was pleasantly surprised overall. I almost never listen all the way through when I listen to people's recordings but I did with this.

Some things that came to my mind... the singing felt like it came out of nowhere. I was expecting it to start around the 30 second mark, especially when I heard the drum fills. There wasn't much to indicate when the singing started. Putting the vocals in a little earlier in the song would make it sound more natural to me. Also, I felt like the rhythm guitar could have been a little louder in the mix. The singer was out of tune at parts, wasn't he.

Overall, like I said, well done though.

By the way, both links lead to the same song.
Wow! That's great! I'm really happy you like it.

Yeah the singing comes in at a bit of a weird place. Will definitely change that if I keep the song. I also need to work on my singing, I agree. I'm pretty new to it... Do you think the tone is OK, even if it's a bit out of tune sometimes?

Oops, I didn't realise the link was the same... Just changed that.

Thanks very much for listening!

Last edited by DanielShaw123 at Apr 30, 2011,
yeah really nice man, really dig this... like the dirty hendrix-styla slowfunk, yes, thats the sort of thing to get my head noddin!
Thumbs up & come collaborate!