#1
Just kinda wrote something while working...

City of Hypocrites

Words are meant to do more
Express what you want to do
Doing the action
Is not the word's purpose

I remember a girl
Who said she will never love again
I will not fall for anyone again she spoke
By the next shine of the silver star
She has tasted the fruit of men once more

Do you speak of porcelain promises?
You words form a broken shield
Content in living
In the city of hypocrites

A man of 20 years
Speaks the writings on the wall
Shame painted the pillars
Inscribing his plans on the unstable foundation
Then it crumbled

Will it always be this way?
Will we ever do what we say?
Or will envy consume our actions?

Do you speak of porcelain promises?
Empty sentences fill the crumbling wall
Your words form a broken shield
Content in living
in the city of hypocrites

Do you do as you say, not as you do?

You Hypocrite?
#2
A few good parts but overall i think it needs a lot of work. but with any lyrics its how it fits with a song if thats your intentions.

a lot of the time its not what you are saying but how you are saying it.