#1
http://soundcloud.com/kerryritter/one-last-wish

I'd like to hear critique, I've never done this style of music
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Last edited by DiveRightIn63 at May 1, 2011,
#4
Quote by knitest1ck
That's awesome, it deserves better than a joke name


Changed it!

I'm glad you to hear you guys like it! Thanks for listening
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#5
Fixed up some vocals and re-up'd it.
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#7
Holy shit, I was not expecting this. 0:24 in and I'm already impressed. Way to go. Lyrics?
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Laney VC15-110 Old English White '10
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#8
Quote by Haanz
Holy shit, I was not expecting this. 0:24 in and I'm already impressed. Way to go. Lyrics?


I updated the description with the lyrics. I'm glad you like it man!

Thanks to everyone for letting me know their thoughts, I'm glad (and honestly surprised) with the feedback!
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#9
Listened a second time with the lyrics.. yeah, really digging this man. Genuinely want to hear more of this.
Quote by Marcel Veltman
Being a rather mediocre musician myself, I'm all on the hand of Haanz.

Guitar:
MIM '09 Fender Telecaster
Laney VC15-110 Old English White '10
Freshman FOP1DN Acoustic

Bass:
Ibanez SRX590
Laney RB4
Tech21 SansAmp BassDriver DI
Boss ODB-3
Last edited by Haanz at May 1, 2011,
#10
Quote by Haanz
Listened a second time with the lyrics.. yeah, really digging this man. Genuinely want to hear more of this.


Wow, cool. I'll PM you when I have some other songs, which I'll do once this semester ends.
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