#2
It feels like you are playing it a little bit fast... slow down just a little bit through some of the verse. I think you are speeding through it.

As well, I think you lose tempo a bit when you go from the fingerpicking to the strumming. Check it with a metronome when you play and see if you are staying on time. Just felt a little weird during your transition.

Your voice is great and really does fit the song quite well. Good choice.

If you get the chance, could you check out some of my stuff?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1437774
#3
Wow great voice! Well done. I think you oughtn't hold back so much on the strumming parts. Let it out, especially on the chorus. And yes, slow down a bit. But really really impressive voice. Check out my youtube link in my sig!
#4
Quote by JustJeff
It feels like you are playing it a little bit fast... slow down just a little bit through some of the verse. I think you are speeding through it.

As well, I think you lose tempo a bit when you go from the fingerpicking to the strumming. Check it with a metronome when you play and see if you are staying on time. Just felt a little weird during your transition.

Your voice is great and really does fit the song quite well. Good choice.

If you get the chance, could you check out some of my stuff?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1437774


I checked some out. Thank you for the criticism as well, this was a while back and I had the same opinions from other people. I just wanted to gather some more before I decide what I need to fix when I re-do it, because I think this was only a day after hearing the song. Once again, thanks. :]


Quote by Icarus Lives
Wow great voice! Well done. I think you oughtn't hold back so much on the strumming parts. Let it out, especially on the chorus. And yes, slow down a bit. But really really impressive voice. Check out my youtube link in my sig!


Thanks :] Do you mean like, strumming more aggressively? Lol. And yeah yeah the slow down :p Thank you, I left my comment in your thread.
#6
Quote by shir6392
hey, i really like your voice
put the guitar in the light so others can see your playing, and learn from you..
the song is amazing and you did a really good job..

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would you check my cover 2 ??
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6hqORmw4Xy4


thank you
i left my comment on your video!