Cookie93
Cookie93
Join date: Aug 2008
125 IQ
#1
Here's a pretty short, simple 6/8 song I wrote to try and mix my writing up a bit from overly thought out riffs and bridges.

Any comments and crits would be much appreciated

Cheers

Chris.
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The Wolves.gp5
iron_maiden93
Registered User
Join date: Sep 2006
533 IQ
#2
I like the bridge section, feels like it floats by too fast though and comes across a little too busy in contrast with the barebones verse. The chorus is nice enough, although personally think it sounds better to have the C# as a minor.

Overall it sounds like the start to a good song, nice work.
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