#1
One Mile
Keeps me from you
Don't Matter Though
Cause you're a world away from this place
this empty cage
you won't show your face
so I sit alone in my darkness


We write letters
The calls help some
but still I long
To lose myself in your eyes and your smile
You love me too
I see it's true
But you're locked up, far far away


One day you're here
but the time flies by
and with a choking sigh
you leave, my heart to ache again
ache again
ache again
ache again
ache again


This song sounds very much like Pineapple Thief - It's a slightly complicated, somewhat dark-sounding acoustic guitar piece, about never being able to see my girlfriend xD Can anyone offer any criticism for it, or ways it could be better?
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#2
lol man u should do it a bit bigger and if you join any instrument you'll see things you will want to change
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i'm out of my mind, insane, and what i say is sht or doesn't make sense, still your reading this.
#3
That's 3 verses - The chorus is acoustic. I'm currently using my trusty Guitarpro to tab it all out, but I estimate it'll be approximately 3 minutes long, so I'm happy with the length of it, unless once I'm done it falls short of that
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#4
lol don't u have a guitar?
Living is a bless, most of the people just exist

i'm out of my mind, insane, and what i say is sht or doesn't make sense, still your reading this.
#5
I've got a guitar, but I need to record the idea. Plus, it means I don't have to play it
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Grass stains on my dicks

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Pfft. Gay? Nah, gay is the manliest sex that exists.