Not digging the vocals sorry. I liked the idea of them and the girls voice but the lyrics or the way she says them just isn't right yet. Its good but not as good as it could be. May'be rework them.

Love the drums, guitar, bass. I would try maybe overdubbing more guitars honestly.

Good work though. 8/10
Thanks guy! Appreciate the feedback. I should mention I'm the bass player btw
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