It's not bad. Not too crazy about the tone from your guitar though... Seems a bit flat (not pitch flat, but like... not full). I don't know if it's the way you recorded it or it's the guitar.

Great playing though. You have great control when you play. The only part that you sort of lost it was around the 1:08 mark where you break into a little hammeron/pulloff motif. I think you might of struggled a bit and it shows in the recording.

Other than that though, good job.

If you get a chance, could you check out some of my stuff?
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Ah, it's instrumental. Nevermind, it is good though!

I'm seeing him live Thursday night, so stoked.

I'm jealous - couldn't go to the London gig because it's over 18s. Going to the September one though. Should be good!