#2
Shack1212,
Thanks for the reviews! "On Fire": audio quality is pretty good for youtube. The guitar sounds nice, and good melodies; most of the playing is good, though once in awhile you slow down briefly. Singing is mostly good, once in awhile slightly pitchy. Vocal melody & lyrics are good. Nice song! Keep at it, but don't count on making a living in music. I've had 19 songs get played on the radio (between 2 different stations) and haven't received a penny (that's pretty typical in the music biz). I have a guitarist friend that went on tour with a TV star/musician, had hundreds of screaming girls at the concerts & my friend made $32 a day. He quit shortly before the band played on the Jay Leno Tonight Show. He played 2 songs on the TV star's CD, supposed to get payed for it & got nothing.
Last edited by aaron aardvark at May 7, 2011,
#3
Good song!

guitar sounds solid just keep the tempo consistent (not that it was WAY off just a tad bit as said above me) If you actually get this recorded put it up I'd love to hear it!
#4
Incredibly simple for sure, but there is in no way anything wrong with simplicity. Your voice has a very nice warm quality to it though. Excellent lyrics as well too.

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=27134934#post27134934
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#5
Great playing and good melodies, vocals and lyrics are good too, not much else to say, just a good song and a good job playing it keep it up!
#6
Hey Shack! Sorry for the very late crit-back. Your video has been taken down, is there another way we can listen?