#1
C4C? ALWAYS.
Before ya say it, YES this does sound very, very close to survive by rise against lol I wrote this on the same thought stream so the idea is very, very close.
And if you're offended by the song title.... lol

Some always seem happy,
and some are f*cking wrecks.
Somehwere between falling down,
and standing up to attack.

Some will live life wanting,
wanting something real.
Something without hurt or pain,
Merely a happy life.

Life may just be a test of time,
How long you last, with all the lies.
We've all said sorry, we've all done our time.
but the goal tonight, is only to survive.

Some will live life longing,
longing for just a home.
Running from their problems,
only winding up alone.

Some will try to lead on,
Everyone as they see fit.
The only thing that cross their minds,
Is how hard you are whipped.

Life may just be a test of time,
How long you last, with all the lies.
We've all said sorry, we've all done our time.
but the goal tonight, is only to survive.

(Acoustic)

You'll never understand,
what life might throw your way.
Is it a gift or a curse,
Take it how you may.
Last edited by Caboose911 at May 6, 2011,
#3
Quote by mulefish
Sounds slightly like Survive by Rise Against......

+1 I was just thinking the EXACT same
"Spin the middle side topwise. Topwise!"

"And there's Jimmy Page, the biggest thief of American Blues music"
#4
Quote by mulefish
Sounds slightly alot like Survive by Rise Against......
Fixed. I mean, the first two lines of Survive have almost the same words just moved around:

"Somewhere between happy, and total ****ing wreck
Feet sometimes on solid ground, sometimes at the edge"

vs.

"Some always seem happy, and some are f*cking wrecks.
Somehwere between falling down, and standing up to attack."
#5
rise against:

We've all been sorry, (who we are) we've all been hurt
But how we survive, (who we are) is what makes us who we are

Yours:

We've all said sorry, we've all done our time.
but the goal tonight, is only to survive.
"Spin the middle side topwise. Topwise!"

"And there's Jimmy Page, the biggest thief of American Blues music"
#6
Deja vu.
"Remember, remember the 5th of November. The gunpowder, treason and plot. I know of no good reason why the gunpowder treason should ever be forgot"
#7
Dull read, except for the fact the title pissed me off. I'm a female, and what you're suggesting is that you'll be with a woman despite her undesirable personality as long as she's attractive. **** that. If you don't change that attitude, you'll be miserable forever.
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Last edited by Svetlova at May 4, 2011,
#8
Quote by Bair
rise against:

We've all been sorry, (who we are) we've all been hurt
But how we survive, (who we are) is what makes us who we are

Yours:

We've all said sorry, we've all done our time.
but the goal tonight, is only to survive.


lol i forgot to include that in the post, before i wrote this that song kinda drove this.
Be aware this song has a completely different tempo and it sounds a hell of a lot different. I will say though... It's on almost a parallel line with survive
#9
Quote by Svetlova
Dull read, except for the fact the title pissed me off. I'm a female, and what you're suggesting is that you'll be with a woman despite her undesirable personality as long as she's attractive. **** that. If you don't change that attitude, you'll be miserable forever.


....lol.... you take sh*t too seriously. I have a girl who I am very happy with, its just a saying i thought up one day.
I ain't sexist, I quite like women