Hey guys!

I was wondering If you possibly could take a look at my riff, and tell your honest opinion. This is my first riff ever ever, longer than few seconds, and this is probably going to be my bands first song off The first album!

The band doesn't exist yet because my friend drummer is still collecting money for his drumset

About myself: I'm 20year old, and I come from Poland. We've almost got the band ready, my friend on bass, me on lead/rhythm and other friend on drums. I havnt really been playing for long so please be gentle, this is my first real creation.

Ow, and I'll repost the video next week with Shure SM58, wich is on its way to my home from ebay, so don't mind the poor audio quality and simply enjoy the riff

Here it goes!

Last edited by Szneka at May 4, 2011,