#1
I went to bed last night, singing our favorite song
Memories floating by, then they grew cold
In my dream, I saw you there
Your were in my arms, I was brushing your hair
I lifted your head, looked in your eyes
I lifted your head, and said don't wake me tonight

(Chorus):
Don't wake me tonight, cause I don't want to go back home
Don't wake me tonight, cause I don't want to be alone
Don't wake me tonight, cause I don't want to be alone
Don't wake me tonight, cause I don't want to go back home
Don't wake me tonight, cause I don't want to go back home
Don't wake me tonight, cause I'm sick of being alone

Remember last summer when we walked down the coast
I wrote our names in the sand, carved them in the gazebo
You looked at me, said "I love you more than anything"
"I love you baby, forever and always"

(Chorus):
Don't wake me tonight, cause I don't want to go back home
Don't wake me tonight, cause I don't want to be alone
Don't wake me tonight, cause I don't want to be alone
Don't wake me tonight, cause I don't want to go back home
Don't wake me tonight, cause I don't want to go back home
Don't wake me tonight, cause I'm sick of being alone

My friends helped me out, yeah they really pulled through
Picked me off the ground, said, "Man we're with you"
Took my mind off of things they that doesn't even matter
"who gives a damn man, we're all that ****ing matters."
They say I'm doing fine, that's hard to believe
Maybe it's true, or maybe it's just a dream

(Chorus):
Don't wake me tonight, cause I don't want to go back home
Don't wake me tonight, cause I'm tired of being alone
Don't wake me tonight, cause I don't want to be alone
Don't wake me tonight, cause I don't want to go back home
Don't wake me tonight, cause I don't want to go back home
Don't wake me tonight, cause I'm sick of being alone

I'm so sick of it, so sick of it
I'm so sick of it, so sick of it
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#2
It was good, although
Remember last summer when we walked down the coast
I wrote our names in the sand, carved them in the gazebo
You looked at me, said "I love you more than anything"
"I love you baby, forever and always"

was a little "meh" for me, I just wasn't feeling it on that one. Other than that, however, it's an excellent song, great flow, well written... all that jazz. Anyways, this has potential, I'd go with it.
I'm just like the Jonas Brothers,

I'm no longer relevant and write mediocre music.