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Heyy, so I've started writing some lyrics. Would love if you'd take a look and crit it Thanks!


The silent heart, burning within
With no notice to be made
The fear grows stronger every day
Though with no eyes repaid

I hear screaming down the hallway
A voice from far away
The laughter of a little child
Will she ever find her way?

Stop the cry of this child
Fill the void, just for a while
Keep her safe; keep her warm
Or soon she will no longer be more

To think of this, it makes me tear
Out of sadness; out of fear
To find this person again someday
Will it have a price to pay?

For the girl, who needs a lead
Needing a person, for her heart to feed
She is lost, with no idea
That he might just disappear

Stop they cry of this child
Fill the void, just for a while
Keep her safe: keep her warm
Or soon she will no longer be more
Last edited by Maddita at May 12, 2011,