#1
So.. What do you guys think? I hope the lyrics are creepy enough


Red lips and hazy eyes,
adulteress with the sexy smile,
bare skin and sweet breath,
she won’t let you have a rest.
She will spin you around,
make you do things you don’t want to,
and when she’s had her fun,
she’s through with you
and here my friend it has begun,
her sick way of leaving when she’s done.

The only way to love her, release her,
the only way to keep her, sedate her,
the only way to stop her, be her,
welcome to your own world my love,
where chloroform loving it is.

Black hair and long legs,
classy, walking on-stage set,
sore touch and reaching hand,
makes you tremble on demand.
She will seduce you good,
make you see what you don’t,
and when the game turns old,
her warmth will go cold,
and here my friend it has begun,
her sick way of leaving when she’s done.

The only way to love her, release her,
the only way to keep her, sedate her,
the only way to stop her, be her,
welcome to your own world my love,
where chloroform loving it is.

Scarlet lust and lacy bra,
never thought she’d go this far,
craving game and changing rules,
proves that men are unchanging fools.
She will take it real’ far,
make you believe what she wants,
and when she’s proved herself right,
she calls off the night,
and here my friend it has begun,
her sick way of leaving when she’s done.

The only way to love her, release her,
the only way to keep her, sedate her,
the only way to stop her, be her,
welcome to your own world my love,
where chloroform loving it is.

You thought night was done,
but really darling, it has only begun,
chloroform loving, here we come.
#2
Was this based on John Fowles' "The Collector" by any chance? Good lyrics by the way!
#4
Good altogether man but the "she'll seduce you good" could use some work. The concept is good though and I really like the way it reads.
#5
I like the concept, but it would be cool if you could really play up the creepiness and give it a darker tinge, and a title change could be prudent so that people won't expect the change in tone.