#1
due to the fact that my first song i posted wasn't ridiculed by everyone, ima post one more.

any opinion about it would be nice, criticism needed.

thank you all again for viewing/anyposts
Attachments:
Song 2.gp5
Gear
Ibanez RG421EXFM
Line 6 Spider III 75 watt
Epiphone Futura Prophecy Custom
Martin 1970's D-28
#2
anything?
Gear
Ibanez RG421EXFM
Line 6 Spider III 75 watt
Epiphone Futura Prophecy Custom
Martin 1970's D-28
#3
I don't have much time, but the intro riff is too long and gets boring quick, the chorus makes the song stand out and the Oboe melody (vocal track I guess), just has this amazing happy feeling together with the nice chords
#4
Love the oboe melody with the chords.makes me miss sumone or sumthin'.the solo is also kinda cool. The main riff is different,but i kinda like it.