Overall I liked it quite a bit. Not a conventional sounding ballad at all and seemed a little more unique with the darker mood which was nice. The Harmonic/Feedback in the break was a very nice touch leading into the chorus but I really think that sort of gradual rise with the lead could be revisited as a lead-in to the solo which would give it a nice epic feel. The synth strings were very subtle but added a nice layer throughout. Honestly, I kept thinking throughout listening to this that it would be a great fit for a song in a Dracula type Stageplay or something of that sort (Dracula's Ballad!) lol. Good job man, definitely an interesting listen and very solid.

If you can, I'd appreciate it if you would take a look at my new original here -> https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1440805