#1
Something I wrote for English :P

Finish me now, cold
frigid hell. Loud winter winds.
I take my last breath.
Quote by skylerjames13
This +10000

You're a decent 11'er Bryc3e


Nothing can keep you away from the need to create.. Cause your path is free! - Jari Maenpaa
#2
This is actually intense. From what I gather, it's about freezing to death? I actually physically feel what you are going for here, which is actually difficult with such restrictions, like that of a haiku.
#3
Quote by Rocks ur Life
This is actually intense. From what I gather, it's about freezing to death? I actually physically feel what you are going for here, which is actually difficult with such restrictions, like that of a haiku.


Yeah I agree with him
Ima Dude Dressed Like Another Dude Playing As Another Dude
#4
Quote by ATREYUFAN4LIFE
Yeah I agree with him


You do know your sig is retardedly fucked up right?

OT: yeah man, that was a banger of a haiku. Good job. Usually haikus that I've read are more lofty, idea laden, but this is just harsh and to the point.
#5
Thanks for the comments guys. Glad you liked it.
Quote by skylerjames13
This +10000

You're a decent 11'er Bryc3e


Nothing can keep you away from the need to create.. Cause your path is free! - Jari Maenpaa