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A Life Of Quiet Desperation
verse 1
he is a saint to no avail
ever constrained by his feeble will
he is a man seeming so alone
in thought as well in deed

verse 2
he is lost in a dark sphere
his skin’s so pale and bleak
an ill-advised act of his own
he sets off and leaves

prechorus
contemplating his life, he sees
a life of quiet desperation he was bequeathed
yet no more
no more

chorus
ascend above the ashes
leave his crumbled world behind
set sail to the seven seas
following his destiny
tonight

verse 3
to cross the line he must denounce
redeem what is left of his mind
to destroy the ghosts of his former life
he must set himself free

bridge
his motives are true
his mind is pure
never again will it be led astray
may those who have fallen
be chained to the floor
freedom forever more

prechorus
contemplating his life, he sees
a life of quiet desperation he was bequeathed
yet no more
no more

chorus x 2
ascend above the ashes
leave his crumbled world behind
set sail to the seven seas
following his destiny
tonight

So yeah, it's something I wrote yeserday. I like it myself a lot, and I am curious what others think of this piece.

C4C derp
Yeah