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put a rough version up about a year ago found it again the other day touched it up a bit. crit for crit
The air i breathe is diseased
A sea of empty souls surround me
Look to the sky this can't be it
Nothing ives it just exists
I've no time no time for this now
Iv'e no time no time for this now

My souls vacant nothing here makes me lose my breath
Empty heart empty heart
Except this one thing that i always knew would be trouble
Yeah she was trouble from the start
I knew she was trouble from the start

The air she breathed was diseased
Crucified by anothers needs
I hoped someday that she'd decide to stray
And find herself walking my way
And find herself walking my way

Two souls vacant nothing here makes us lose our breath
Empty hearts empty hearts
Why'd she make those eyes when we both know shes got
To just walk on by
I couldn't stop her if i tried

The cure is there but out of reach
We both share the same disease
How i would make her sweat slip that dress from round her neck
I could fill her empty heart
I could fill her empty heart

Then one night to my surprise she came through with a smile
A look i'd never seen before
She pressed her body to mine an i held her in tight
Our clothes on the bedroom floor
Her heart beat fast that night

I awoke alone in a cold sweat
With visions i could not forget
Though its hard to pretend
These thoughts they have to end
For she belongs to my friend
#3
The air she breathed was diseased
Crucified by anothers needs


Dude, that line is amazing. I don't know why, but it stood out to me more than anything in the piece.

Overall, I like it a lot!

Check mine out if you get time, I don't have a link, but it's called Chasing Dreams.
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