I enjoyed this. I feel like alot of the energy was lost in the recording process, but a studio recording should solve that. Really, the only major problems I have simply have to do with the mixing of the recording--such as how the vocalist sounds like he's not singing with the band, if that makes sense. I liked the lyrics, the pacing and structure is good, the riff is fine--abliet slightly repetitive in the beginning of the song, but that's nothing to worry about--and I liked the punky solo you did with the ocataves towards the middle.

All in all, I wish I had some more constructive things to say, good work!


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