#1
Verse 1
Rain streaked windows, thunder in the sky.
Matches my confusion, the tears in her eyes,
Broken words and shattered dreams.
A lie on a chain wrapped around her neck
A key to her heart I swore to protect.

Pre – Chorus
So before you go can we act out just one more scene?
Even if it were make believe, it’d still mean everything.

Chorus
Please lower your mask and let’s just pretend.
That everything’s okay and this isn’t the end
Please fake a smile. Join me in a dance
Let’s look in our eyes as if its love at first glance
For tonight’s our last night before we say our goodbye

Verse 2
Sunny mornings and an empty heart
Makes me wish I never laid down next to you
Maybe it’s just me oh how I refused to see
That I was simply a boy, just a body in your bed

Pre – Chorus
So before you go can we act out just one more scene?
Even if it were make believe, it’d still mean everything.

Chorus
Please lower your mask and let’s just pretend.
That everything’s okay and this isn’t the end
Please fake a smile. Join me in a dance
Let’s look in our eyes as if its love at first glance
For tonight’s our last night before we say our goodbye

Verse 3
An empty home on a Saturday night
You’re probably out with your best friend
Though I’m not on your mind I wish you could see
That I wrote you a gift and it’s one of a kind
Even if you’re in love with another guy, even if you’re long gone on a happy road
I still sing you this song with high hopes that you will hear
That you were the girl of my dreams even in make believe
I still sing you this song with hopes that someday you will know
That you were the girl that I truly adored.
(End with pre-chorus)
#2
Ahh this is really nice Everything's really..poetic The only line that I'd change tho, is the line in the 3rd verse where it says "You're probably out with your best friend" I'm not very keen on that.

I like the structure of your lyrics, and I really like the fact that you end the song with the pre-chorus Awesome stuff. Great job! What kinda music were you planning on adding to this?`

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1440383 - C4C?
#3
Thank you so much for the feedback! And its acoustic music similar to bands like Secondhand Serenade or City & Colour thank you so much again