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Hi,

I'm currently working on a new song with a friend and this is what we have so far. I'd really appreciate any feedback you have on the song - what is need/isn't needed. One thing I thought was that the verse and chorus need to differentiate more but I'd like to hear what anyone has to say:

http://soundcloud.com/greg-ryan/break-you-down-huw-knight

Thanks Guys!
Last edited by greg272 at May 16, 2011,